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those perfect lovers
argue over minor stuffs
cuddling romances
passion embraces
calmly lick wounded ego
a balm for soured hearts
she avoids darkness
escapade with naughty sun
tickling squint in eyes
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I can see a scene happening like a movie!! Lovely haiku!!
ReplyDeleteWow... agree with Nanka...! I could imagine a slideshow moving in my head! ;)
ReplyDeleteThank You Pranita :-)
DeletePerfection is a superficial dimension! Interesting haiku!
ReplyDeleteThanks Gemma :-)
DeleteEach tells its own story. I enjoyed them.
ReplyDeleteThank You Mary :-)
DeleteNicely! The first one's my favourite.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much :-)
DeleteExcellent Haiku! Loves the lines.
ReplyDeleteI stumbled upon your blog and found so many great stuffs here. Your works are really amazing. I had a great time reading some of them. Keep them coming! :)
Thank You Balqis :-)
DeleteArguing over minor stuff..... perhaps that leads to making up! :)
ReplyDeleteLove Letter
I guess so :-)
DeleteWhat a passionate and sensual poem. Loved each verse here!
ReplyDeleteThanks Write Girl :-)
Deletepicturesque haiku blending with perfection& passion..GOD<3U
ReplyDeletebeautiful, lovely! First one is awesome.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written..:)
ReplyDeletekeep writing..:)
Loved this, I too saw it as a movie x a cinematic experience in your words. Very clever
ReplyDeleteThanks so much :-)
DeleteFinally I could get to this place... Very nice that..as Nanka said..scenes unfold themselves.. Good one..
ReplyDeleteI am here: http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/04/orange-spills-on-water.html
Thank You Ramesh Sir :-)
Deletelovely imagery there :)
ReplyDeletesmall things n great love
Thanks Jyoti :-)
DeleteTerrific use of imagery.
ReplyDeleteThank You Bo :-)
DeleteThat second one is wonderful!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sara :-)
DeleteReal lovely haiku
ReplyDeleteThanks Celestine :-)
DeleteI love the idea of the passion embraces as a balm for soured hearts!
ReplyDeleteThank You Robyn :-)
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