Both are AWESOME! :)2nd one is appealing! Love to read whatever you write..
Thanks Simran :-)
*bows down*
Thank You Ratika :-)
revolution! wonderful set!! http://blackandwhiteheart.wordpress.com/2013/04/03/april-haiku-month-day-3-candle/
Thanks Sankara :-)
I love the contrast between the two...
I hope your moth is not the symbol of hope marching for change. That would be so sad.
Naah ... those two are different contexts :-)
These are both very strong and in different ways. I like them both.
Thanks Alice :-)
The molten tears and the lifeless moth - powerful images! Dramatic haiku!
Thank You Gemma :-)
Towards the light we fly ... taking chances ... always taking chances ... if, by chance, we win ... it will male us stronger, Mr.G ... Love, cat.
You are so correct Cat :-)
"weeps molten tears"...adore the first haiku yet second is also lovely.
Thanks Maggie :-)
Both are beautiful...but then I find darkness to be very stubborn..walks back in slowly...RS
Thank You Sir :-)
Sitting in Kolkata, the second one today sounds so meaningful and poignant. Both of them are awesome...:)
Speck Kudoos..I liked the first one which has a message that reminds me of what is written in Bhagavad gita..really nice yar.GOD<3U
I loved the second one, it has a distinct ring to it.
I loved the second haiku .. so powerful!
Thank You buddy :-)
Very well written
Thanks Celestine :-)
The first one is very touching really. I like the idea that the flame would leap over the dead moth.
Thank You Mary :-)
These haiku are powerful yet poignant,,food for thought,,written beautifully,,
Loved both haiku...But I loved the first one more !
Thank You Valli :-)
Juxtaposed context but powerful and poignant in their own way ..
Ahh... love the message of this one. Powerful and beautiful. :-)Eliz
Thank You Eliz :-)
wow.... great!
Thanks Sreeja :-)
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Both are AWESOME! :)
ReplyDelete2nd one is appealing! Love to read whatever you write..
Thanks Simran :-)
Delete*bows down*
ReplyDeleteThank You Ratika :-)
Deleterevolution! wonderful set!!
ReplyDeletehttp://blackandwhiteheart.wordpress.com/2013/04/03/april-haiku-month-day-3-candle/
Thanks Sankara :-)
DeleteI love the contrast between the two...
ReplyDeleteI hope your moth is not the symbol of hope marching for change. That would be so sad.
ReplyDeleteNaah ... those two are different contexts :-)
DeleteThese are both very strong and in different ways. I like them both.
ReplyDeleteThanks Alice :-)
DeleteThe molten tears and the lifeless moth - powerful images! Dramatic haiku!
ReplyDeleteThank You Gemma :-)
DeleteTowards the light we fly ... taking chances ... always taking chances ... if, by chance, we win ... it will male us stronger, Mr.G ... Love, cat.
ReplyDeleteYou are so correct Cat :-)
Delete"weeps molten tears"...adore the first haiku yet second is also lovely.
ReplyDeleteThanks Maggie :-)
DeleteBoth are beautiful...but then I find darkness to be very stubborn..walks back in slowly...
ReplyDeleteRS
Thank You Sir :-)
DeleteSitting in Kolkata, the second one today sounds so meaningful and poignant.
ReplyDeleteBoth of them are awesome...:)
Speck Kudoos..I liked the first one which has a message that reminds me of what is written in Bhagavad gita..really nice yar.GOD<3U
ReplyDeleteI loved the second one, it has a distinct ring to it.
ReplyDeleteI loved the second haiku .. so powerful!
ReplyDeleteThank You buddy :-)
DeleteVery well written
ReplyDeleteThanks Celestine :-)
DeleteThe first one is very touching really. I like the idea that the flame would leap over the dead moth.
ReplyDeleteThank You Mary :-)
DeleteThese haiku are powerful yet poignant,,food for thought,,written beautifully,,
ReplyDeleteLoved both haiku...But I loved the first one more !
ReplyDeleteThank You Valli :-)
DeleteJuxtaposed context but powerful and poignant in their own way ..
ReplyDeleteAhh... love the message of this one. Powerful and beautiful. :-)
ReplyDeleteEliz
Thank You Eliz :-)
Deletewow.... great!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sreeja :-)
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