What a beautifully unique thought here!
I love summer afternoons under the shade tree...good times :)
Ya they sooth us :-)
I read this Haiku several times just to make that smile retain on my face :) I reach out my hands for collecting the clouds too. This is a beautiful Haiku :)
I am glad I could make you smile :-)
Rain and shade of the tree - a romantic juxtaposition
Yes they go perfectly together :-)
Thank you for this exquisite haiku.
Thanks Leovi :-)
Beautiful... I only wish trees remain for the future generations to gather memorable clouds...
I hope so too ... we should preserve nature now !!!
Small, deep, fetching and lovely...
Thanks Namrata :-)
This warms my heart.
And this makes my heart warmer :-)
Beautiful expression
Inspiring verses. I can feel the song and rain in this haiku.
Thank You write Girl :-)
Collecting clouds is so romantic!
Yes they are :-)
Wow! This is so good :)
Thanks Divya :-)
This is really nice...I liked the picture!:)And congratulations on getting published in the very famous (Bestseller I guess) anthology...:)
Thank You Tarang ... and yes, it is a bestseller now (thankfully) :-P
wow....the last line is a gem....
Thank You Ali :-)
I just read your Paper boat poem and this one!! It felt like I was about to taste something simply marvelous and it ended RIGHT then!
ooops ... I hope it didn't disappoint you :-P
What a beautifully unique thought here!
ReplyDeleteI love summer afternoons under the shade tree...good times :)
ReplyDeleteYa they sooth us :-)
DeleteI read this Haiku several times just to make that smile retain on my face :) I reach out my hands for collecting the clouds too. This is a beautiful Haiku :)
ReplyDeleteI am glad I could make you smile :-)
DeleteRain and shade of the tree - a romantic juxtaposition
ReplyDeleteYes they go perfectly together :-)
DeleteThank you for this exquisite haiku.
ReplyDeleteThanks Leovi :-)
DeleteBeautiful... I only wish trees remain for the future generations to gather memorable clouds...
ReplyDeleteI hope so too ... we should preserve nature now !!!
DeleteSmall, deep, fetching and lovely...
ReplyDeleteThanks Namrata :-)
DeleteThis warms my heart.
ReplyDeleteAnd this makes my heart warmer :-)
DeleteBeautiful expression
ReplyDeleteInspiring verses. I can feel the song and rain in this haiku.
ReplyDeleteThank You write Girl :-)
DeleteCollecting clouds is so romantic!
ReplyDeleteYes they are :-)
DeleteWow! This is so good :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Divya :-)
DeleteThis is really nice...I liked the picture!:)
ReplyDeleteAnd congratulations on getting published in the very famous (Bestseller I guess) anthology...:)
Thank You Tarang ... and yes, it is a bestseller now (thankfully) :-P
Deletewow....the last line is a gem....
ReplyDeleteThank You Ali :-)
ReplyDeleteI just read your Paper boat poem and this one!! It felt like I was about to taste something simply marvelous and it ended RIGHT then!
ReplyDeleteooops ... I hope it didn't disappoint you :-P
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