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Tuesday, February 26, 2013

Caterpillar



let me sleep
within my cocoon
in peace

silk rain
on mulberry leaves
I wash my face

I play the flute
amid clouds of love
like butterfly


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Caterpillar.




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47 comments:

  1. Maliny2/26/2013 12:24:00 pm

    Each haiku , if read separately too carries a message in itself . Thats brilliance . You have weaved magic with your words too like a caterpillar :)

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    1. Maliny2/26/2013 12:26:00 pm

      Is there any way you could move the ad behind your header to the side bar or something , if its ok ? I feel as though a large space separates the header and the post . .

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    2. Maliny2/26/2013 12:38:00 pm

      * ad below your header , not behind ok

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    3. Amrit Sinha2/26/2013 11:41:00 pm

      I too have been thinking on moving the ads, or changing its style so that the space doesn't look empty .. will do it this weekend :-)

      Thanks for such lovely words on my Haiku :-)

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  2. Anonymous2/26/2013 01:56:00 pm

    i like the calmness that each haiku exudes..love the mention of mulberry leaves :)

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  3. Brian Miller2/26/2013 04:49:00 pm

    nice...particularly like that last stanza....between the flute and butterflies....beautiful elements...

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  4. Woman'n'Beyond2/26/2013 05:02:00 pm

    from cocoon to butterfly , you have covered the journey with élan. First one is my favourite.

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  5. Anonymous2/26/2013 06:42:00 pm

    Your middle verse spoke joy to me! The idea of a caterpillar getting its face washed! Wonderful image.
    Where are the Butterflies?

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  6. Optimistic Existentialist2/26/2013 07:11:00 pm

    I love the message of this one sir...transformation :)

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  7. Grace2/26/2013 07:27:00 pm

    I particularly like the second one, silk rain on mulberry leaves ~

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  8. kaykuala2/26/2013 07:47:00 pm

    Like the first GS! Very seldom one gets to be alone! Nice thoughts!

    Hank

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  9. Anonymous2/26/2013 08:04:00 pm

    Very soothing haiku ~ well penned ~ ^_^

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  10. Magical Mystical Teacher2/26/2013 08:24:00 pm

    My weekends are my cocoon!

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  11. joanne2/26/2013 10:59:00 pm

    musical and magical...and full of depth...

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    1. joanne2/26/2013 11:00:00 pm

      re: Drum ad: I attend a djembe drum circle weekly, and perused this site for a new drum! thanx

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    2. Amrit Sinha2/26/2013 11:55:00 pm

      Thanks Joanne :-)

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  12. Reshma2/26/2013 11:30:00 pm

    Simply lovely... First the peaceful sleep, then the fresh rain for face-wash, only the clouds of love could complete this dream...

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  13. Reading Pleasure2/26/2013 11:52:00 pm

    Oh, they are very nice, Green Speck. I like the last one bet.

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  14. Lolly2/27/2013 12:20:00 am

    Green Speck your work is especially awesome today. Love the middle haiku the best.

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  15. WritingsForLife2/27/2013 12:39:00 am

    These days, I wish for that too. Beautiful :-)

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  16. brudberg2/27/2013 02:21:00 am

    That second haiku is pure brilliance.

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  17. Anonymous2/27/2013 02:34:00 am

    Bravo - all three a delight. Thank you :)

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  18. Mary2/27/2013 03:37:00 am

    These are lovely! So well expressed...each of them.

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  19. Chèvrefeuille2/27/2013 01:33:00 pm

    Brilliant series on Caterpillar. Feels like meditation, contemplation and sweet silence. Thank you for sharing.

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  20. Panchali2/27/2013 08:04:00 pm

    Very beautiful...especially the last one robbed my heart:) Kudos..

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  21. Maggie Grace2/27/2013 11:44:00 pm

    All so light and lovely...just like a butterfly.

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  22. Ellecee3/01/2013 08:38:00 am

    This is so pretty,,,,GS. all of it,,,makes my heart heal,,,

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    1. Amrit Sinha3/01/2013 11:52:00 am

      Thanks for your constant support Ellecee :-)

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  23. Sara McNulty3/04/2013 10:30:00 am

    All so beautiful, but I adored the first one. It had a certain peace about it.

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