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"You are so pretty."
"Am I? Even Mark was saying so last night... Oops!"
"Mark? Who is Mark?"
"Oh forget it dear. Would you like a kiss?"
This Micro-fiction of 140 Characters is shared with Succinctly Yours.
sly, succinct, naughty...
ReplyDeleteHa ha ... thanks Meenakshi :-)
DeleteLol, I liked this.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kiara :-)
DeleteOppppsssss... ;)
ReplyDeleteHa ha :-)
Deleteoh my... to make others smile is a blessing Amrit.
ReplyDeleteThis really means a lot to me ... thanks Sreeja :-)
DeleteThat's a "Gotcha". It happens :-)
ReplyDeleteYes I know ;-)
Deletegood one!
Deletebad! too bad! not the micro fiction, i mean the lady ;)
ReplyDeleteOooo... cheat!
ReplyDeletePerhaps that's what she thought as wise ;-)
DeleteOh oh....I would say she was caught!! The kiss was being used as a diversionary technique.
ReplyDeleteYes ... that was the case ;-)
DeleteOh yes, please do "forget it dear,
ReplyDeletekiss and forget."
Very nice take on the prompt, G.S.
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oops?? Lol! I petty the man asking, Who is Mark? Lovely idea & loved the characters & flow of the micro-fiction. Simply, a commendable job done :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Tanya :-)
DeleteHey GS ..um really sorry ..has not been regular hopping and commenting on the posts..was really stuck up hard..Any ways I have always loved reading your poetry and these 140 characters did a mind blowing job..
ReplyDeleteloved reading it..
Cheers
Happy festive season to you :)
Thanks Odyzz ... Have a great season too :-)
DeleteHa ha ha ... Thanks Loredana :-)
ReplyDeleteVery clever. Do you suppose a kiss will distract him?
ReplyDeleteA kiss can distract any guy ;-)
DeleteShe's a heart-breaker...playing the guys...but not too bright! Cute story.
ReplyDeleteThanks Pat :-)
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