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Live Your Life
Love Your Life
Break The Swords
Burn The Knives
'Cause Life Ain't A Battle
That You Got To Fight
It's A Subtle Moment
To Eliminate Wrong From Right
False Depths Of Despair
A Guide To Tumultuous Shore
Rotten Evil's Plan
To Scramble Your Core
Illustrate The Charm
Being Upbeat Is The Key
Sallow Wrath Your Foe
Disguised Wanderer Free
Happiness Flees Fast
Elusive Gift Of God
Swelling Pain Hurts
Enable Dreams Broad
Dreams Of Joy
A Smiling Ray
The Sun Now Coy
The Moon Comes To Play
And Thus I Say ...
Live Your Life
Love Your Life
Break The Swords
Burn The Knives
'Cause Life Ain't A Battle
That You Got To Fight
It's A Subtle Moment
To Eliminate Wrong From Right
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WoW! Bravo such a lovely poem, it got so well with Live your life, your blog title. We really should break the swords to breathe our heart out. Perfect composition, :D Take care !
ReplyDeleteThanks Tanya :-)
DeleteYou got them all covered with this. I guess with all things, we have to know the bad side, to recognise the good.
ReplyDeleteGreat poem
Thank You Bren :-)
DeleteI completely agree with you on this one, Just like you, I feel that Life isn't a battle that we got to fight, rather its a collection of subtle moments to be felt deeply and rejoiced....I also feel and I do agree that we should eliminate the wrong from the right, although we have our own definition of right and wrong , still...I always want to do good and be in the right path. Really,its a great tribute to the name of your blog, which is perhaps the essence of your life too .
ReplyDeletehave a wonderful day !
Thanks Sanghamitra :-)
DeleteI love the cadence that rolls through the piece. A little yin yang at play. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank You Brenda :-)
DeleteGreat job! Beautiful writing!
ReplyDeleteWhat a powerful piece with an uplifting message...
ReplyDelete'Cause Life Ain't A Battle
That You Got To Fight
It's A Subtle Moment
To Eliminate Wrong From Right
Thank You Serena :-)
DeleteThat is an amazing poem...life is indeed not a battle but all about relishing what comes in the moment ...beautifully expressed :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Swarnali :-)
DeleteLove the pulse that beats in this piece. And I love the repetition of these two powerful stanzas:
ReplyDelete"Live Your Life
Love Your Life
Break The Swords
Burn The Knives
'Cause Life Ain't A Battle
That You Got To Fight
It's A Subtle Moment
To Eliminate Wrong From Right"
Thank You Marianne :-)
DeleteAah this poem is full of passion..using words..to breathe..to live..Jae
ReplyDeleteThanks Jae :-)
Deletegreat poem and words to live by - live your life, love your life!
ReplyDeleteThank You Robyn :-)
DeletePowerful advice... especially:
ReplyDeleteIllustrate The Charm
Being Upbeat Is The Key
Thanks Laurie :-)
DeleteBrilliant Work.
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautiful way of looking at Life.
Love the rhyme scheme.
The best part is where you portray life as nothing but elimination of wrong from right.
Keep writing, people like you will add to the glory of literature. :)
Thank You Ms Assassin :-)
DeleteThis is awesome. So many prompts in one single poem is an amazement for me. This poem is like a theme-poem of your blog :)
ReplyDeleteWell you definitely hit a bulls-eye with this all encompassing poem today.
ReplyDeleteThank You Mary :-)
Deletevery philosophical poem ~ well penned and great inspiration ~ (A Creative Harbor) ^_^
ReplyDeleteThanks Carol :-)
DeleteThis shows your versatility, speck! awesome...
ReplyDeleteThank You Panchali Ji :-)
Deleteclever use of words and a positive message as well.
ReplyDeleteThanks Abin :-)
DeleteGreat poem. Being optimistic is the key.
ReplyDeleteGreat message. The repeating of the first stanza at the end makes it come full circle. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sherry :-)
DeleteGreat poem and message, I hope you love your life, I love your poem.
ReplyDeleteThank You Daisy :-)
DeleteLove this poem :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Kiara :-)
DeleteI love this!! Excellent use of the words and such a powerful, perfect message. :-)
ReplyDelete'Break The Swords
ReplyDeleteBurn The Knives'
I loved these lines, I wish world could live that way...
I agree with you Meenakshi :-)
DeleteYou make it look easy - Great post!
ReplyDeleteIt was easy :-P
DeleteI particularly like the repeated refrain, and felt the ebbing and flowing of emotion and perspective that inevitably occur over a lifetime.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kim :-)
DeleteI am struggling to write a good thought on this poem, this is one of a kind and unique poem I have ever read. I loved it, thanks for writing :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Dark Angel :-)
DeleteUnique, beautiful. It gave me great enjoyment.
ReplyDeletewoww...so many prompts and such a beautiful poem...that too with a good message..
ReplyDeleteGreat job Amrit!
Thank You so much Sreeja :-)
Deletepowerful opening.
ReplyDeleteThanks Nancy :-)
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