The emotion of the woman and her life situation at that moment has been nicely conceptualized and you were able to evoke emotions in these few lines.Keep writing !
This is really good...Very good!!!
desolation is felt. Hard to do in so few characters!
Just tried my best :-)
Very well dome, Green Speck!! So much said in so few words!! bravo!! Mine is hereHave you a BLESSED WEEK!!!hugsshakira
Thanks Shakira :-)
The void so articulately sketched! Brilliant...!
Thank You Ma'am :-)
Very nice, G.S. ~~ It sounds like you too have felt at times that you are theonly and last living person on the earth...
Ha ha ... I guess all of us have felt it at times :-)
"Down To My Last Cigarette" ... by k.d lang ... comes to mind ...
I haven't heard of it, but will surely read it now :-)
Awww darn it.
It's sad :-(
Its sad, told you, guys are heartless, and you proved it here :Pgood one!
Ha ha ha ... exceptions are there too :-P
So little words and everything relayed :)+Not Just My Allegories+
Thanks Anisha :-)
nice take on this week's challenge. take care.
Thank You Ruthi :-)
You packed a lot of emotion into your story. Nicely done and I truly enjoyed it.
Heartfelt. A vacant cafe definitely highlights the feelings.
Thank You Mary
The emotion of the woman and her life situation at that moment has been nicely conceptualized and you were able to evoke emotions in these few lines.
ReplyDeleteKeep writing !
This is really good...
ReplyDeleteVery good!!!
desolation is felt. Hard to do in so few characters!
ReplyDeleteJust tried my best :-)
DeleteVery well dome, Green Speck!! So much said in so few words!! bravo!! Mine is here
ReplyDeleteHave you a BLESSED WEEK!!!
hugs
shakira
Thanks Shakira :-)
DeleteThe void so articulately sketched! Brilliant...!
ReplyDeleteThank You Ma'am :-)
DeleteVery nice, G.S. ~~ It sounds like you too have felt at times that you are theonly and last living person on the earth.
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Ha ha ... I guess all of us have felt it at times :-)
Delete"Down To My Last Cigarette" ... by k.d lang ... comes to mind ...
ReplyDeleteI haven't heard of it, but will surely read it now :-)
DeleteAwww darn it.
ReplyDeleteIt's sad :-(
DeleteIts sad, told you, guys are heartless, and you proved it here :P
ReplyDeletegood one!
Ha ha ha ... exceptions are there too :-P
DeleteSo little words and everything relayed :)
ReplyDelete+Not Just My Allegories+
Thanks Anisha :-)
Deletenice take on this week's challenge. take care.
ReplyDeleteThank You Ruthi :-)
DeleteYou packed a lot of emotion into your story. Nicely done and I truly enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteHeartfelt. A vacant cafe definitely highlights the feelings.
ReplyDeleteThank You Mary
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