tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post3579494750315145657..comments2024-03-26T22:35:33.294+05:30Comments on Live Your Life: The White Flower GirlAmrit Sinhahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-82670276013199873982013-10-03T12:46:00.899+05:302013-10-03T12:46:00.899+05:30Thank You buddy :-)Thank You buddy :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-58371606249872875032013-10-03T00:28:40.777+05:302013-10-03T00:28:40.777+05:30Telling a story in one line is amazing. Your last ...Telling a story in one line is amazing. Your last line unfolded all the story and you kept it weaving so beautifully :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-57220724618814543892013-09-20T23:57:49.948+05:302013-09-20T23:57:49.948+05:30Thanks a lot Satya :-)Thanks a lot Satya :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-63083462645006595942013-09-20T17:02:09.911+05:302013-09-20T17:02:09.911+05:30Oh! I loved the ending... though sad...
Because it...Oh! I loved the ending... though sad...<br />Because it came as a surprise<br />And the words you have chosen are so poetic!Locomentehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16891335111277665181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-57322286769564597222013-09-19T11:08:34.730+05:302013-09-19T11:08:34.730+05:30Thanks :-)Thanks :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-81676982586337830852013-09-19T11:05:08.254+05:302013-09-19T11:05:08.254+05:30Thank You Joe :-)Thank You Joe :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-22794983137850772422013-09-19T11:01:20.010+05:302013-09-19T11:01:20.010+05:30Heartbreaking, but still beautiful :) Heartbreaking, but still beautiful :) Hardihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04144474341859905374noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-35431959051408075252013-09-19T10:59:17.316+05:302013-09-19T10:59:17.316+05:30Thanks a lot :-)Thanks a lot :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-43892026698711460392013-09-19T10:57:01.327+05:302013-09-19T10:57:01.327+05:30Thank You Patricia :-)Thank You Patricia :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-88379664504299361452013-09-19T10:48:33.705+05:302013-09-19T10:48:33.705+05:30Thank You Namrata :-)Thank You Namrata :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-91448417784248061302013-09-18T12:28:31.098+05:302013-09-18T12:28:31.098+05:30Situations like that can be very hard on you. Very...Situations like that can be very hard on you. Very well written.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-15808269783988831192013-09-17T14:20:21.100+05:302013-09-17T14:20:21.100+05:30You just wrapped someone's whole life in few w...You just wrapped someone's whole life in few words!<br />Superb! :)Aqsa Manzoorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01767449948135874520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-79243026425354866862013-09-17T08:30:12.605+05:302013-09-17T08:30:12.605+05:30I love surprise endings...even the sad ones. Well ...I love surprise endings...even the sad ones. Well done.Patriciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11067000448205048484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-53799154271589986292013-09-16T14:43:43.960+05:302013-09-16T14:43:43.960+05:30that was very gripping..
I couldn't have guess...that was very gripping..<br />I couldn't have guess that she was his wife<br />loved the image of flowers and all beauty u created with your wordsJyoti Mishrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01794675170127168298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-67787413867765637442013-09-16T12:50:20.330+05:302013-09-16T12:50:20.330+05:30A nice and twisted ending :)A nice and twisted ending :)Namratahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12820835864095505007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-68885408853869209452013-09-16T12:01:54.675+05:302013-09-16T12:01:54.675+05:30Thanks Karan :-)Thanks Karan :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-26586313603500558292013-09-16T12:01:12.616+05:302013-09-16T12:01:12.616+05:30Thank You Gillena :-)Thank You Gillena :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-64045449578957794872013-09-16T11:59:48.922+05:302013-09-16T11:59:48.922+05:30Thanks a lot Mary :-)Thanks a lot Mary :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-19397140849549588412013-09-16T11:58:20.720+05:302013-09-16T11:58:20.720+05:30Thanks Arka :-)Thanks Arka :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-68551260868467197172013-09-16T11:57:55.646+05:302013-09-16T11:57:55.646+05:30I am sorry about that ... hope I can do better in ...I am sorry about that ... hope I can do better in future :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-41681090286700423482013-09-16T00:31:41.141+05:302013-09-16T00:31:41.141+05:30The last line was very moving...The last line was very moving...Karan Sampathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02775527551590322213noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-67471112166464838682013-09-15T23:52:48.317+05:302013-09-15T23:52:48.317+05:30good write; have a nice Sunday
much love...good write; have a nice Sunday<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-57194170108381450962013-09-15T23:43:14.204+05:302013-09-15T23:43:14.204+05:30Amrit, your poetry becomes better and better. I e...Amrit, your poetry becomes better and better. I enjoyed this poem as it progressed, and then the twist in the ending took my breath away. VERY well penned.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-84131314824439234352013-09-15T23:32:51.022+05:302013-09-15T23:32:51.022+05:30heartbreakingly beautiful
heartbreakingly beautiful<br /><br />Arkahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16840514172273373397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-45103605883720017802013-09-15T23:07:19.259+05:302013-09-15T23:07:19.259+05:30I'm so sorry, but it just left me confused. Th...I'm so sorry, but it just left me confused. The title and image made me think of a flower girl, aka a little 3 or 4 year old who proceeds the bride. So "urge... to kiss her silken skin, to play with her reddish lips was too strong..." just didn't sit right. Then at the end, I could tell I'd read it wrong, but rereading didn't help me interpret it the way you intended. It just left me lost, but I'm gad other people liked it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com