Tuesday, July 29, 2014

She Weeps In Her Cage

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a few birds flutter
in clear blooming horizon
she weeps in her cage


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Horizons - Clear.



40 comments:

  1. Loved the contrast shown here!

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  2. ... that' why keep the cage door open at all times for him ...

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  3. I admire the contract of freedom and cage ~ Good one Amrit ~

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  4. Beautifully written. A caged bird is a sad sight...

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  5. The thrill of freedom in the open skies is unparalleled.

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  6. Freedom! Every being wants and loves it.Nice imagery.

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  7. the lines create the necessary impact

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  8. Wish it could fly away in the clear sky. You have shown its misery!

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  9. Cages make me sad, even the ones we construct for ourselves.

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    1. Yes, freedom is what we all deserve and need :-)

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  10. This was beautifully moving ---

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  11. We do take our freedom for granted, don't we...

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  12. Lovely poetic metaphor.

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  13. ah..why would anyone cage a bird :(

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  14. very sad ! and what a juxtapost ! wonderful !

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  15. How could she not weep? The open sky had waited too long for her.
    Very nicely written! :)

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  16. It is so cruel to cage birds....all the 2 legged birds !

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  17. Ahh! You always say a lot in just a few words :)

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