tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post5947165414661848166..comments2024-03-26T22:35:33.294+05:30Comments on Live Your Life: The Golden VeilAmrit Sinhahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-43043048663668168702013-04-27T00:23:35.973+05:302013-04-27T00:23:35.973+05:30That's very true my friend :-)That's very true my friend :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-44236746412732350522013-04-24T12:56:37.762+05:302013-04-24T12:56:37.762+05:30It does look beautiful ... as long as it lasts ......It does look beautiful ... as long as it lasts ... o, Mr.G ...^.^https://www.blogger.com/profile/17422876955246850636noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-29942753286613918352012-11-14T13:12:19.882+05:302012-11-14T13:12:19.882+05:30Thanks Ermisenda :-)Thanks Ermisenda :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-80085592183299490232012-11-14T06:45:55.760+05:302012-11-14T06:45:55.760+05:30Great use of repetition! Beautiful work, Green Spe...Great use of repetition! Beautiful work, Green Speck. Sharp at the core! Thanks for contributing this week to Picture it & write.<br /><br />- ErmisendaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-1695425551176641342012-11-11T12:07:49.207+05:302012-11-11T12:07:49.207+05:30Thank You Sara :-)Thank You Sara :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-43161993525100478302012-11-11T09:23:23.622+05:302012-11-11T09:23:23.622+05:30That first stanza repeated at the end is stunning....That first stanza repeated at the end is stunning. Love the poem.Sara McNultyhttp://purplepeninportland.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-80404945775414871632012-11-10T12:15:52.472+05:302012-11-10T12:15:52.472+05:30Thanks Janie :-)Thanks Janie :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-85769423862369377462012-11-10T12:14:29.110+05:302012-11-10T12:14:29.110+05:30Thanks Anisha :-)Thanks Anisha :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-43942077530826005702012-11-10T12:14:14.996+05:302012-11-10T12:14:14.996+05:30Thank You Meenakshi :-)Thank You Meenakshi :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-84603398837105241642012-11-10T12:12:07.074+05:302012-11-10T12:12:07.074+05:30Thank You Crystal :-)Thank You Crystal :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-55293233367284602012-11-10T12:11:33.071+05:302012-11-10T12:11:33.071+05:30Thanks Damyanti :-)Thanks Damyanti :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-48691865718584656112012-11-10T12:11:18.364+05:302012-11-10T12:11:18.364+05:30Thank You Carol :-)Thank You Carol :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-52331843138003462132012-11-10T08:30:20.909+05:302012-11-10T08:30:20.909+05:30One word: BEAUTIFULOne word: BEAUTIFULJaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16721358814229182218noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-39817645599412512262012-11-10T03:55:21.178+05:302012-11-10T03:55:21.178+05:30Aww how sad. Brilliant imagery.Aww how sad. Brilliant imagery.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-50843663336330485992012-11-09T20:03:37.715+05:302012-11-09T20:03:37.715+05:30THAT... was breathtakingly beautiful!! THAT... was breathtakingly beautiful!! Anisha https://www.blogger.com/profile/01166774782544460000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-26469925232778700412012-11-09T19:23:45.399+05:302012-11-09T19:23:45.399+05:30longing and failure in love so poignantly describe...longing and failure in love so poignantly described...congrats for this one!Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-88499510343283450092012-11-09T18:32:17.070+05:302012-11-09T18:32:17.070+05:30I enjoyed the way this poem progressed; and repeat...I enjoyed the way this poem progressed; and repeating the first stanza at the end really heightened the impact. Well written to prompt as well.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-7992931821519193312012-11-09T18:25:37.475+05:302012-11-09T18:25:37.475+05:30Oh my goodness. Amrit!! You out did yourself on th...Oh my goodness. Amrit!! You out did yourself on this one.. It's absolutely beautiful and the imagery you painted is simply stunning. This is truly amazing! Thank you so much for sharing this. C.S.Hhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06931727241982253089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-64648259934074466692012-11-09T18:21:35.503+05:302012-11-09T18:21:35.503+05:30Vivid lines. Thanks for sharing this.Vivid lines. Thanks for sharing this.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04283371140346602856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-40929697648981535162012-11-09T18:08:24.976+05:302012-11-09T18:08:24.976+05:30Lots of talent and wisdom in your poetry and wonde...Lots of talent and wisdom in your poetry and wonderful emotion ~ (A Creative Harbor) ^_^carol l mckennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06151914466378663660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-32453674771271027742012-11-09T14:55:13.660+05:302012-11-09T14:55:13.660+05:30Futile hope
Wrinkles her smile
The fingers once cu...Futile hope<br />Wrinkles her smile<br />The fingers once curled<br />Now lost in the wood<br /><br />Sadly it is a quaint picture of disappointment. Wonderful write GS!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-60775770622927027252012-11-09T12:43:42.884+05:302012-11-09T12:43:42.884+05:30Thank You so much Kiara ... this means a lot to me...Thank You so much Kiara ... this means a lot to me :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-37755950024653536272012-11-09T12:39:05.041+05:302012-11-09T12:39:05.041+05:30And I must also mention, Mr. Speck, you are one cr...And I must also mention, Mr. Speck, you are one creative guy :) Hardihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04144474341859905374noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749282111714972839.post-75498548549407839092012-11-09T12:37:45.685+05:302012-11-09T12:37:45.685+05:30Speechless on this one :)Speechless on this one :)Hardihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04144474341859905374noreply@blogger.com