Tuesday, April 14, 2015

Lion



"You still haven't brought my lunch?"the lion roared.

"I tried my best O Lion, but I apologize for not having succeeded," the lioness replied softly, scared of the wrath of the lion. She was getting older, and thus the agility and swiftness of her youth were now lost in past.Hunting for prey turned out to be difficult.

"So what do you suggest? Shall I bring a new lioness?" There was wickedness in his eyes.

The Lioness didn't want to let go of her love. She walked out of the cave, hoping to get lucky with a prey this time.



This 99 word fiction is shared with Blogging from A to Z April Challenge - L.



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29 comments:

  1. Vinay Leo R.4/14/2015 12:23:00 am

    Hmm. Even in love, it's survival of the fittest, huh?

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  2. Anonymous4/14/2015 12:43:00 am

    Oh god, why must life be like this?

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  3. Unknown4/14/2015 12:55:00 am

    So apparently even the males in other species treat women badly... 😔

    Sanch @ Living my Imperfect Life

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    1. Amrit Sinha4/19/2015 03:17:00 pm

      Mistreating someone is not related to gender I would say :-)

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  4. Blogoratti4/14/2015 01:26:00 am

    It's a great tale, forces one to have an opinion almost immediately!

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  5. Sreesha Divakaran4/14/2015 11:35:00 am

    How cruel! I feel so sad for the lioness.

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  6. Locomente4/14/2015 12:36:00 pm

    Love of lioness... The way lion has taken her for granted... Insecurity...
    You have conveyed so much in these few lines!

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  7. Prasanna Rao4/14/2015 12:51:00 pm

    Sad that the lioness had become a prey to her own love. But any love that is manipulative is not true. She should just kick his lazy butt and demand that he gets his own food :)

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  8. Sundari Venkatraman4/14/2015 04:59:00 pm

    Poor lioness!
    You are welcome to check my A-Z posts here: http://sundarivenkatraman.blogspot.in/

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  9. Boisterous Bee4/14/2015 05:41:00 pm

    That's what every female do's.. to whichever species she belong..
    Well portrayed Amrit..

    Cheers

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  10. Vinitha4/14/2015 06:51:00 pm

    That's bad! Poor lioness.

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  11. Swathi Shenoy4/14/2015 08:09:00 pm

    Such a cruel lion :@ I feel bad for the lioness

    Like It Happened Yesterdy

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  12. Unknown4/15/2015 12:53:00 am

    Inequality there too :(

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  13. Rajlakshmi4/15/2015 09:43:00 am

    poor Lioness. I feel so bad for her. Well written

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  14. rudraprayaga4/15/2015 12:00:00 pm

    Is it the male's trick or hhis lust? Poor lioness! Very nice, Amrit.

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  15. Amrit Sinha4/19/2015 03:16:00 pm

    Thanks Emmanuel :-)

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