Wednesday, February 05, 2014

I Will Dance To Your Tune, Tonight



I will dance to your tune
tonight, tonight
with angels from the moon
alright, alright

in a perfect trance
we swing, we swing
like the waves that roll
we sing, we sing

now let me say
in my own special way
I love you thus
and it's here to stay
no storm can plunder
neither shall we sway
I love you my love
I love you this way

I will dance to your tune
tonight, tonight
with angels from the moon
alright, alright

in a perfect trance
we swing, we swing
like the waves that roll
we sing, we sing


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37 comments:

  1. Nice swing with the rhythm !!!
    Beautifully woven

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  2. I love the rhythm! This could very well be a song :)

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  3. Very rhythmic poem. I liked the alliteration in each stanza. A nice romantic thought!

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  4. The flow is just like a song....Beautiful and Lovely Amrit! :)

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  5. this is def very lyrical...the repetition gives it that feel...i could hear the rhythm of it.....

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  6. This is nice and should be set to music.

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  7. Romantic...
    A splendor...
    Nice composition...
    Song-like charm!

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  8. "no storm can plunder neither shall we sway" I love this line because ti speaks to ever-lasting love.

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  9. Love it, love it, love it ! What a composition Amrit.. Nw why cant I create something so beautiful :|

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    1. You create more beautiful stuffs buddy :-)

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  10. Nice and light love poem about a big night.
    I like, "wish I were there."
    ..

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  11. What a soulful rhythm of your poem.

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  12. Let's dance ... walz ... slowly ... Love, cat.

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  13. It is such a hummable composition...Beautifully worded Amrit!!

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  14. I could see a lady in red waltzing!!!

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  15. What a lyrical composition-and oh s very romantic :-)Loved it Amrit!

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  16. Valentine's effect too early? :P

    Beautiful this was! :)

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