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I will dance to your tune
tonight, tonight
with angels from the moon
alright, alright
in a perfect trance
we swing, we swing
like the waves that roll
we sing, we sing
now let me say
in my own special way
I love you thus
and it's here to stay
no storm can plunder
neither shall we sway
I love you my love
I love you this way
I will dance to your tune
tonight, tonight
with angels from the moon
alright, alright
in a perfect trance
we swing, we swing
like the waves that roll
we sing, we sing
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Nice swing with the rhythm !!!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully woven
Thanks Veena :-)
DeleteI love the rhythm! This could very well be a song :)
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteVery rhythmic poem. I liked the alliteration in each stanza. A nice romantic thought!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much :-)
DeleteI so so love it! Beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteThe flow is just like a song....Beautiful and Lovely Amrit! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Valli :-)
Deletethis is def very lyrical...the repetition gives it that feel...i could hear the rhythm of it.....
ReplyDeleteThank You Brian :-)
DeleteThis is nice and should be set to music.
ReplyDeleteThanks Cait :-)
DeleteRomantic...
ReplyDeleteA splendor...
Nice composition...
Song-like charm!
Thank You Satya :-)
Delete"no storm can plunder neither shall we sway" I love this line because ti speaks to ever-lasting love.
ReplyDeleteThanks Keith :-)
DeleteLove it, love it, love it ! What a composition Amrit.. Nw why cant I create something so beautiful :|
ReplyDeleteYou create more beautiful stuffs buddy :-)
DeleteLilting and lyrical!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
DeleteNice and light love poem about a big night.
ReplyDeleteI like, "wish I were there."
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What a soulful rhythm of your poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much :-)
DeleteLet's dance ... walz ... slowly ... Love, cat.
ReplyDeleteIt is such a hummable composition...Beautifully worded Amrit!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Reshma :-)
DeleteI could see a lady in red waltzing!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Rajesh :-)
DeleteBeautifully musical
ReplyDeleteThank You Pea :-)
DeleteWhat a lyrical composition-and oh s very romantic :-)Loved it Amrit!
ReplyDeleteThanks Atreyee :-)
DeleteA lovely swing, Amrit.
ReplyDeleteThanks Celestine :-)
DeleteValentine's effect too early? :P
ReplyDeleteBeautiful this was! :)
It's a work of pure fiction :-)
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