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Wednesday, March 13, 2013

Wavy Curls


swirls misty
flowing deep nectar
answers new
in pearls white
hidden within promises
locked in wavy curls


This Shadorma is shared with The Mag - Mag 159.





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24 comments:

  1. Optimistic Existentialist3/13/2013 01:05:00 am

    The wavy curls of the sea...love it.

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  2. Margaret3/13/2013 01:25:00 am

    deep nectar Creative description of the sea's appeal!

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  3. WritingsForLife3/13/2013 02:47:00 am

    locked in wavy curls - beautiful :-)

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  4. The Write Girl3/13/2013 04:02:00 am

    Beautiful imagery here. The waves beckon us in.

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  5. Reshma3/13/2013 04:31:00 am

    Visual poetry, wavy curls, misty swirls...
    beautifully crafted GS:)

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  6. adhi das3/13/2013 08:32:00 am

    locked in wavy curls u r indeed a gifted writer!!GOD<3U

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  7. Anonymous3/13/2013 07:59:00 pm

    Very nice! You captured it well.

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  8. Carrie Van Horn3/13/2013 09:22:00 pm

    Love the way you described the waves Green Speck...beautiful indeed!!

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  9. Tess Kincaid3/13/2013 11:57:00 pm

    Metaphorically yummy...

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  10. hyperCRYPTICal3/15/2013 02:25:00 am

    Lovely lovely dreamy write.

    Anna :o]

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  11. Silent Otto 3/15/2013 08:57:00 pm

    Awesome image of the ocean as Goddess hair, thanks zspeck

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  12. Gerry@Strummed Words3/16/2013 03:53:00 pm

    I like the promises locked in wavy curls. Very nice.

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  13. Jyotsna Bhatia4/20/2014 10:17:00 pm

    Awesome. How do you even think of such metaphors. Pass on some ideas to me pleaassee...

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