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Saturday, March 02, 2013

Sae Kaeru



icy flakes
on petals of spring
in my castle

cotton fairies
descend from clouds
sing and dance


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Sae Kaeru.





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24 comments:

  1. Woman'n'Beyond3/02/2013 11:36:00 am

    very creative, snow as cotton fairies, very imaginative!

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  2. Unknown3/02/2013 01:57:00 pm

    wow. Nice to have stumbled your blog of Haiku(s).
    I felt cold. Despite the fact that I never experienced snow before.. HAHAH.. exchange links?
    xesex82.blogspot.com

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  3. kelvin s.m.3/02/2013 03:23:00 pm

    ...icy flakes on petals of spring --- what a lovely image you've created there... plus the cotton fairies --- oh, you see 'em too... great combo...double + like... smiles...

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  4. Unknown3/02/2013 06:13:00 pm

    loved your haiku! such a lovely inspiring prompt for today!

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  5. Brian Miller3/02/2013 07:39:00 pm

    ha the cotton fairies descending to dance...i like that much...there is joy in that....

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  6. Optimistic Existentialist3/02/2013 09:40:00 pm

    Flowers among snow...nice contrast :)

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  7. Magical Mystical Teacher3/02/2013 10:14:00 pm

    "cotton fairies" has a nice, airy ring to it!

    Cold Snap

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  8. odyzz3/02/2013 10:29:00 pm

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  9. joanne3/02/2013 11:03:00 pm

    snow is beautiful when those big icy flakes come down..,,,your first haiku struck me as deeply layered with the mention of your 'castle'.....

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  10. Anonymous3/03/2013 12:32:00 am

    oooh oooh oooh, I LIKE these ... ice flakes, castles and cotton fairies!!! :)
    Cold's Deception Lurks

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  11. brudberg3/03/2013 02:46:00 am

    Cotton fairies, love it. Almost a kenning actually..

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  12. adhi das3/03/2013 09:45:00 am

    dear green speck u write a thousand words to show us a beautiful dream by ur creative style...superb line icy flakes on petals of spring.GOD<3U

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  13. Reshma3/04/2013 05:41:00 am

    I love the dance of cotton fairies...wonderfully woven lines!!

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  14. Sara McNulty3/04/2013 10:31:00 am

    Love those cotton fairies!

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