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Weary ambition,
Traversing across island,
Finding its way out.
Island of rainbow,
Painting the river, VIBGYOR,
Caressing the shore.
This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Island.
really enjoyed the first one. :)
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteI liked Vibgyor.. its interesting.... shows each colour..
ReplyDeleteRS:)
Thanks Sir :-)
DeleteTricky... fitting all those colors within the syllable count! I like to imagine the painted river.
ReplyDeleteThank You Barbara :-)
DeleteI like the idea of rainbow caressing the shore! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Pranita !!!
DeleteWhat a wonderful place to be. Good one. Thx for sharing.
ReplyDeleteA very tranquil and colourful haiku. Would love to be there. :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ellecee :-)
Delete...Island of rainbow ~ great visual ~ serene haiku ~ lovely ~ (A Creative Harbor)
ReplyDeleteOhh the joy of finding an ambition. Lo & behold~ beautifully carved :)
ReplyDeleteI love ALL the colours of the rainbow in the second one.
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Liked the idea of ''Weary ambition''
ReplyDeleteIsland of rainbow..I can see the colors in your haiku...nice!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Odyzz :-)
DeleteSecond haiku is my favorit...
ReplyDeleteNice thought..
http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/island-express.html
Thank You :-)
DeleteReally like your personification of the river, and the acronym also works well. Very nice!
ReplyDeleteThanks Ghostom :-)
DeleteThis is nice. There is nothing like the beauty of an island shoreline.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. "Finding" and "caressing", very lovely.
ReplyDeleteThanks Archna :-)
DeleteVery nice... the purpose of the island is its shore
ReplyDeleteThank You Brudberg :-)
DeleteI really like "caressing the shore"!
ReplyDeleteIs it? I love that line too :-)
Deletebeautiful :) and I liked the second part the most :D
ReplyDeleteThanks Vinisha :-)
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